Students asked 47 shoppers at Ambleton market where they had travelled from, to find the market's sphere of influence. Figure 1 shows their results as a desire line map, with the width of each line showing the number of shoppers.
Evaluate the desire line map as a way of presenting these results.
Model answer
The desire line map is an effective way to show the market's sphere of influence because it shows both where shoppers came from and how far they travelled. The furthest origin is Thorpe, about 5 km to the north-east, so the sphere of influence can be estimated. Making the line widths proportional to the number of shoppers means the most important origins stand out: Elmdon, with 12 shoppers, and Thorpe, with 9, show that almost half the shoppers came from the north-east. The base map also helps explain this, as both villages lie along the A614.
However, the lines are straight, so they do not show the real routes people took along roads. The lines also crowd together near the market, and with more origins they would overlap and become difficult to read. Grouping shoppers by village hides exactly where they live, and the map says nothing about how they travelled or how often they visit. The map is based on only 47 people on one day, so the sphere of influence it shows may not be typical.
Overall, the desire line map is a good choice for showing direction, distance and the number of people from each place, but it would be more useful with a table of distances and a larger sample.
Explanation
A desire line map is the standard technique for showing spheres of influence, so the best answers explain why it suits the data and use the figure (origins, distances and numbers) before weighing its limitations. A conclusion should make a clear judgement rather than just repeating the points.