Source A: Aeschylus, Persians
The Messenger tells the Persian queen how the battle went.
'At once ship struck ship with its bronze ram. A Greek ship began the charge and smashed off the whole curved stern of a Phoenician ship, and each captain steered his ship against another. At first the flood of the Persian fleet held out; but when the mass of ships was crowded together in the narrows, and none could help another, they were struck by their own side's bronze-mouthed rams, and their whole banks of oars were shattered. Then the Greek ships, not without a plan, surrounded them and struck them from every side. Hulls were turned upside down, and the sea could no longer be seen, so full was it of wrecks and slaughtered men; the shores and the reefs were filled with corpses. ... But the Greeks, as if they were catching tunny or a haul of fish, kept striking and hacking at them with broken oars and pieces of wreckage, and groaning and shrieking filled the open sea until the eye of dark night took it away.'
How does Aeschylus make this description of the battle horrifying? Make two points.
Model answer
Aeschylus uses violent images of destruction: the Persian ships are 'struck by their own side's bronze-mouthed rams' and 'their whole banks of oars were shattered', so the Persians seem to destroy themselves. He also uses a simile from fishing, saying the Greeks hacked at the drowning men 'as if they were catching tunny', which makes the killing seem pitiless and turns the Persians into helpless creatures rather than men.
Explanation
The tunny simile refers to the way fishermen trapped shoals of tuna in nets and clubbed them - a vivid and shocking image for an audience that knew the sea. Good answers name a technique (imagery, simile, sound, scale) and quote the exact words that create the effect.