'Diplomacy outside the League of Nations did more to keep the peace in the 1920s than the League itself.'
How far do you agree with this statement?
Explain your answer.
[16 marks] [SPaG 4 marks]
Model answer
In the 1920s, peace was kept partly by the League of Nations and partly by agreements made directly between governments, such as the Locarno treaties and the Kellogg-Briand Pact. I will argue that diplomacy outside the League did more to keep the peace, because it dealt with the relationships between the great powers on which European peace really depended, although the two often worked together.
The League made a real contribution. It settled several disputes that might have led to war: the Aaland Islands between Sweden and Finland in 1921, Upper Silesia between Germany and Poland in 1921, and the Greek invasion of Bulgaria in 1925, when it ordered a ceasefire and a Greek withdrawal. Its agencies also reduced the causes of conflict: Nansen's Refugees Committee returned about 400,000 prisoners of war, and League loans rescued the economies of Austria and Hungary. However, the League failed when great powers were involved. Poland kept Vilna after seizing it in 1920, Mussolini was rewarded after occupying Corfu in 1923, and the League did nothing when France and Belgium occupied the Ruhr in 1923. It also made little progress on disarmament.
Diplomacy outside the League dealt with exactly these great-power problems. The Washington Naval Conference of 1921-22 limited battleship fleets and prevented a naval arms race between the USA, Britain and Japan. The Dawes Plan of 1924 ended the Ruhr crisis by rescheduling reparations and providing American loans, which the League could not have done because the USA was not a member. Most importantly, the Locarno treaties of 1925 reconciled France and Germany. Germany freely accepted its western borders, Britain and Italy guaranteed them, and the 'spirit of Locarno' led to the Kellogg-Briand Pact of 1928, the Young Plan of 1929 and the early withdrawal of Allied troops from the Rhineland. These agreements involved the USA and Germany, two great powers that were outside the League for some or all of the decade.
However, this diplomacy had limits too. Locarno left Germany's eastern borders unguaranteed, and the Kellogg-Briand Pact had no means of enforcement. The two forms of peacekeeping were also linked: Locarno led to Germany joining the League in 1926 with a permanent seat on the Council, which strengthened the League, and the Locarno treaties gave the League Council the task of judging violations.
In conclusion, I largely agree with the statement. The League settled disputes between smaller states and did valuable humanitarian work, but the greatest threat to peace in the 1920s was the hostility between France and Germany and the economic chaos of the early 1920s. These were tackled by the Dawes Plan and Locarno, not by the League. The League worked best when this diplomacy had created a co-operative atmosphere, so diplomacy outside the League did more to keep the peace.
Explanation
A Level 4 essay explains the League's contribution (Aaland, Upper Silesia, Bulgaria, agencies) and its failures, and compares it with diplomacy outside the League (Washington, Dawes, Locarno, Kellogg-Briand). A sustained judgement might argue that outside diplomacy tackled the great-power rivalries that threatened major war, while recognising that the two were linked.