Source A: Homer, Odyssey 9
Odysseus has shouted his real name to the blinded Polyphemus from his ship. Polyphemus prays:
'Hear me, Poseidon, dark-haired Earth-holder. If I truly am your son, and you claim to be my father, grant that Odysseus, sacker of cities, son of Laertes, whose home is in Ithaca, may never reach his home. But if it is his destiny to see his own people and reach his well-built house and his own country, may he come late and in misery, after losing all his companions, on someone else's ship, and may he find troubles in his house.'
Odysseus adds: 'So he prayed, and the dark-haired god heard him.'
To what extent does Odysseus bring his troubles on himself in Book 9? Use Source A as a starting point and your own knowledge.
Model answer
Source A suggests that Odysseus is largely to blame for his future troubles. Polyphemus can only curse him so precisely - 'Odysseus, sacker of cities, son of Laertes, whose home is in Ithaca' - because Odysseus has just boasted those very details. The curse is terrible: Odysseus is to come home late, in misery, having lost all his companions, on someone else's ship, and find trouble in his house, and the line 'the dark-haired god heard him' tells us it will come true. Odysseus made things worse by ignoring his crew, who begged him not to provoke 'a savage', after the first rock had nearly driven the ship back to shore.
Odysseus' choices also caused trouble earlier in Book 9. In the cave his men begged him to take the cheeses and lambs and leave, but he insisted on staying to see the owner and receive guest-gifts, admitting that 'it would have been far better' to listen. Six of his men were eaten as a result.
However, not all his troubles are his own fault. At Ismarus he ordered his men to leave, but they disobeyed and six men from each ship were killed. Zeus sent the storm afterwards, and the wind and current drove him past Cape Malea to the Lotus-eaters. Polyphemus started the violence by eating his guests and scorning Zeus, so the blinding was self-defence and, as Odysseus says, a punishment from the gods; it had even been foretold by the prophet Telemus. Zeus' rejection of the ram sacrifice suggests that the gods had their own plans for the fleet.
Overall, Odysseus is responsible for the most important of his troubles, Poseidon's anger, because of his pride and his desire for kleos. But many of his other sufferings in Book 9 come from his men's foolishness, the gods and fate, so he brings his troubles on himself only in part.
Explanation
Strong answers separate the troubles Odysseus causes (staying in the cave, boasting his name) from those caused by others (his men at Ismarus, Zeus' storm, Polyphemus' own savagery). The best responses explain why revealing his name matters so much - it gives Polyphemus the power to curse him - and reach a balanced judgement.