'The speed of Russia's mobilisation was the main reason why the Schlieffen Plan failed.'
How far do you agree with this statement?
Explain your answer.
[16 marks] [SPaG 4 marks]
Model answer
The Schlieffen Plan was designed to avoid a war on two fronts by defeating France before Russia could mobilise. Russia's speed undermined one of its central assumptions, and this had important consequences, but I do not think it was the main reason the plan failed, because the failure happened in the west, at the Battle of the Marne.
Russia's speed was certainly significant. Schlieffen had assumed that Russia, with its huge size and poor railways, would take about six weeks to mobilise. But Russia ordered general mobilisation on 30 July 1914, its railways had been improved with French loans, and two Russian armies under Rennenkampf and Samsonov invaded East Prussia from about 17 August, little more than two weeks into the war. The German Eighth Army was pushed back at Gumbinnen, and its commander talked of abandoning East Prussia. This caused alarm in Germany, and around 25-26 August Moltke took two army corps from the right wing in Belgium and sent them east. These men were badly missed in the west when, at the Marne, a gap opened between the German First and Second Armies. In this way, Russia's speed weakened the right wing at the crucial moment.
However, there are strong reasons to doubt that this was the main reason. The two corps arrived in the east too late to take part in the Battle of Tannenberg, where Hindenburg and Ludendorff destroyed Samsonov's army between 26 and 30 August without them. The east was therefore secure, and the real damage came from Moltke's decision rather than from the Russian advance itself. In addition, the right wing had already been weakened before the war, when Moltke changed Schlieffen's balance from seven to one to about three to one.
Other factors were more important. Belgian resistance at Liège, which held out until 16 August, and the destruction of Belgian railways slowed the German advance. Britain entered the war because of the invasion of Belgium, and the BEF delayed the Germans at Mons and Le Cateau. Above all, the French recovered. Joffre kept his armies intact during the retreat, moved troops west by rail and created a new Sixth Army near Paris. When von Kluck turned east of Paris and exposed his flank, the French attacked on 6 September, and the BEF and French Fifth Army advanced into the gap. The German armies, exhausted after weeks of marching and with stretched supply lines, retreated to the Aisne.
In conclusion, Russia's speed was an important factor because it proved one of Schlieffen's key assumptions wrong and led Moltke to weaken the right wing. But the plan failed in the west, where the French counter-attack at the Marne, made possible by Joffre's redeployment and German mistakes, was decisive. Russia's speed contributed to the failure, but it was not the main reason.
Explanation
The best answers explain exactly how Russia's speed affected the plan (the two corps sent east) and then evaluate it: the corps arrived after Tannenberg, and the failure happened in the west. A sustained judgement weighs Russia's contribution against Belgian resistance, the BEF, Moltke's decisions and the French counter-attack.