'The entry of the USA into the war was the main reason why Germany was defeated in 1918.'
How far do you agree with this statement?
Explain your answer.
[16 marks] [SPaG 4 marks]
Model answer
The entry of the USA was one of the most important reasons why Germany was defeated in 1918, because it gave the Allies an advantage in manpower and resources that Germany could never match. However, Germany was also defeated by the failure of its own Spring Offensive, by the military victories of the British, French and Commonwealth armies, by the blockade and by the collapse of its allies. I agree with the statement only partly.
The American contribution was significant in several ways. By the summer of 1918 around 10,000 American soldiers were arriving in France every day, and there were about 2 million by November, while Germany could not replace its losses. The prospect of these numbers forced Ludendorff to gamble on the Spring Offensive before the Americans arrived. American troops then helped to stop the Germans at Chateau-Thierry and Belleau Wood in June 1918 and in the Second Battle of the Marne in July, and in the autumn they fought at St Mihiel and in the Meuse-Argonne. At sea, American destroyers helped the convoys defeat the U-boats, and American loans and food kept the Allies going. Finally, Wilson's Fourteen Points gave the German government a basis on which to ask for an armistice in October 1918.
However, the Spring Offensive itself did enormous damage to Germany. It cost hundreds of thousands of men, many of them the best stormtroopers, and left the German army exhausted and over-extended. The Allied counter-attacks were mainly carried out by British, Commonwealth and French troops. At Amiens on 8 August 1918, tanks, aircraft, artillery and infantry working together broke through the German lines, and Ludendorff called it 'the black day of the German army'. In September the British broke the Hindenburg Line. These victories were made possible by better tactics and by Foch's unified command.
The situation in Germany was also collapsing. The British naval blockade had caused severe food shortages, leading to strikes, falling morale and, eventually, the naval mutinies at Kiel and the revolution of November 1918. At the same time Germany's allies gave up one by one: Bulgaria on 29 September, the Ottoman Empire on 30 October and Austria-Hungary on 3 November. The news of Bulgaria's collapse helped convince Ludendorff to demand an armistice at the end of September.
In conclusion, the entry of the USA was very important because it made German defeat certain in the long run and destroyed German morale. But it was not the main reason for defeat in 1918. The military victories of the Hundred Days, won mostly by British, French and Commonwealth troops, together with the effects of the blockade, actually forced Germany to seek an armistice in the autumn of 1918, before most American soldiers had seen serious fighting.
Explanation
This essay spans the whole of 1918, so Level 4 needs a full explanation of the American contribution and of other factors (the Spring Offensive's cost, the Hundred Days, the blockade, the collapse of Germany's allies), with a sustained judgement about which mattered most.