'Taliban rule brought more benefits than problems to Afghanistan in the years 1996-2001.'
How far do you agree with this statement?
Explain your answer.
[16 marks] [SPaG 4 marks]
Model answer
The Taliban ruled most of Afghanistan from 1996 to 2001. Compared with the chaos of the civil war that came before, their rule brought some real benefits, especially in security. However, I will argue that the problems their rule caused - repression, human rights abuses, economic collapse, continuing war and international isolation - were far greater.
The main benefit of Taliban rule was order. Between 1992 and 1996 rival mujahideen factions had fought a civil war that destroyed much of Kabul, and warlords had robbed travellers and abused civilians. The Taliban removed the checkpoints, disarmed many militias and made the roads safe for trade, which is why many traders and rural Pashtuns welcomed them. Crime fell sharply because of their harsh punishments, and by 2001 about 90 per cent of the country was under one government. Some Afghans, especially in conservative rural areas, approved of strict Islamic rule and the quick justice of the religious courts. In 2000 Mullah Omar's ban on opium also cut production by over 90 per cent in a single year.
However, these benefits came at a terrible price. The Taliban banned women from most work and girls from school, forced women to wear the burqa and used religious police to beat those who broke the rules. Music, television and kite flying were banned, and thieves had their hands cut off and adulterers were executed in public. Ethnic and religious minorities suffered especially: at least 2,000 people, mostly Hazara civilians, were massacred at Mazar-i-Sharif in 1998, and Taliban forces burned villages and drove thousands of Tajiks from their homes north of Kabul. Even the security the Taliban brought was incomplete, as the war with the Northern Alliance continued every year.
Taliban rule also brought economic and international problems. Educated people fled, health and education services collapsed, and when a severe drought struck in 2000-01, millions of Afghans faced hunger while millions more remained refugees abroad. The opium ban, though welcomed abroad, ruined many poor farmers. The Taliban's decision to protect Osama bin Laden made Afghanistan an international outcast: only three countries recognised the regime, the UN imposed sanctions in 1999 and 2000, and aid agencies found it increasingly hard to work. The destruction of the Bamiyan Buddhas in 2001 deepened this isolation. Finally, their refusal to hand over bin Laden after 11 September 2001 brought the US-led invasion and the end of their regime.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement. The Taliban did bring some benefits, especially security and an end to the warlords' abuses, and these were real for many rural Pashtun men. However, half the population - women - lost almost all their rights, minorities were persecuted, the economy collapsed, the war never ended, and the Taliban's protection of al-Qaeda led to international isolation and invasion. The problems of Taliban rule far outweighed its benefits.
Explanation
Level 4 essays give real weight to the benefits (order, safe roads, lower crime, the opium ban) before weighing them against the problems (repression of women, massacres, continuing war, economic collapse, isolation and invasion). The best judgements consider who benefited and who suffered.