Interpretation A: from a history of the American West, written by an American historian in 1962. (Written for practice.)
'The policy of concentration failed above all because the Plains Indians could not, or would not, change their way of life. Their whole society was built on hunting the buffalo wherever the herds went, and on young men winning honour through raiding. No chief could promise that his warriors would stay inside lines drawn on a government map. Raids on wagon trains and between the tribes went on, and the soldiers were bound to respond.'
Interpretation B: from a history of relations between the United States and the Plains peoples, written by a historian in 2009. (Written for practice.)
'Concentration failed because the government would not keep its side of the bargain. The Senate cut the promised payments, agents cheated the tribes, and the goods often arrived late or rotten. Worst of all, when gold was found near Pikes Peak in 1858, nothing was done to keep prospectors out of land that had been guaranteed to the Cheyenne and Arapaho. Instead the tribes were pressed to give that land up. The Indians did not break the treaty; it was broken for them.'
Which interpretation gives the more convincing opinion about why the policy of concentration failed? Explain your answer based on your contextual knowledge and what it says in Interpretations A and B.
Model answer
Interpretation A argues that concentration failed because the Plains Indians would not change their way of life. There is some truth in this. The Plains peoples were nomadic buffalo hunters, and boundaries drawn in 1851 cut across the way they had always followed the herds. The government insisted on dealing with head chiefs, but Plains bands were independent, and young men won honour by raiding, so no chief could guarantee peace. Raids between tribes, and by groups such as the Cheyenne Dog Soldiers, did continue. However, A blames only the Indians and ignores the many ways the treaty was broken by the other side.
Interpretation B argues that the government broke the treaty, and my knowledge strongly supports this. The Senate cut the annuities from 50 years to 10, and goods were often late, poor or stolen by corrupt agents. When the Pikes Peak gold rush brought perhaps 100,000 prospectors into land guaranteed to the Cheyenne and Arapaho in 1858-59, the government did not protect the tribes as promised; Denver was built on their land, and in the Fort Wise Treaty of 1861 some chiefs were pressed to give most of it up. B is weaker in suggesting the Indians played no part, because raids did happen.
Overall, B is more convincing. A identifies a real weakness in the policy, but the decisive reason it collapsed was the government's choice to allow the gold rush and then rewrite the treaty in the settlers' favour at Fort Wise. The Indians' way of life made concentration difficult; the government's actions made it impossible.
Explanation
A good answer tests both interpretations against knowledge: chiefs' limited authority and nomadic hunting (for A), and cut annuities, corrupt agents, Pikes Peak and Fort Wise (for B). Level 4 needs both evaluated and a sustained judgement about which is more convincing, not just a description of each.