'William Wallace was the most important leader of Scottish resistance to Edward I between 1297 and 1307.'
How far do you agree with this statement? Explain your answer.
Model answer
William Wallace was the most famous leader of Scottish resistance, and in 1297-98 he was the most important. However, across the whole period from 1297 to 1307 I think Robert Bruce was more important, because his rising of 1306 began the struggle that finally won independence, while John Comyn kept resistance alive in the years between.
Wallace's importance is clear. In May 1297, when most nobles had submitted to Edward, he began his rising by killing William Heselrig, the English sheriff of Lanark. With Andrew Moray he won the great victory at Stirling Bridge in September 1297, which destroyed English rule. As Guardian of Scotland in the name of King John he raided northern England and organised the kingdom. He never submitted to Edward, was excluded from the terms of 1304 and, after his capture and execution in 1305, became a lasting symbol of resistance. However, he was defeated at Falkirk in 1298 and resigned as Guardian, and after that his role was smaller - in 1299 he went to France to seek help.
Other leaders were also vital. Andrew Moray led the rising in the north in 1297 and shared command at Stirling Bridge - his name comes first on the letter to the merchants of Lubeck - but he died of his wounds in 1297. John Comyn of Badenoch, head of the most powerful noble family, was Guardian from 1298 and kept up resistance for six years after Falkirk; he defeated an English force at Roslin in 1303 and only submitted in 1304 after France abandoned the Scots. Churchmen such as Bishop Wishart of Glasgow and Bishop Lamberton of St Andrews encouraged resistance, won the support of the Pope, who claimed Scotland for the papacy in 1299, and later backed Bruce.
Robert Bruce's role was mixed. He was a Guardian from 1298 to 1300 but submitted to Edward in 1302. In February 1306, however, he killed Comyn and was crowned King of Scots. Although he was defeated at Methven in 1306 and lost his brothers and much of his family, he fought on, winning at Glen Trool and Loudoun Hill in 1307. When Edward died in July 1307, Bruce was still fighting, and he went on to win independence at Bannockburn in 1314.
Overall, Wallace was the most important leader in 1297-98 and the greatest inspiration of the war. But measured over the whole period, Bruce was more important: he gave the Scots a king to fight for, and his persistence in 1306-07 laid the foundation for victory. Wallace's importance lies more in what he symbolised than in what he achieved after 1298.
Explanation
Wallace won Stirling Bridge, led as Guardian and became a martyr, but Moray shared his early success, Comyn sustained resistance from 1298 to 1304, churchmen kept the cause alive, and Bruce's rising of 1306 led to independence. Level 4 weighs Wallace against other leaders with specific detail and sustains a judgement; a narrative of Wallace's life is Level 2.