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The Show Analysis
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Date : 12/06/2017
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Uploaded on : 12/06/2017
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This poem is primarily the expression of the devastation left as a
result of the war. The first stanza paints a desolate descri ption of a dismal
battlefield landscape which then develops into the magnification of
dehumanization between lines 6 and 23. Owen ends the poem in the last stanza
highlighting his personal feelings of terror and the death that permeates the battlefield
of Scarborough. The poet uses metaphorical language which creates a graphic
sensory atmosphere and stilted structure that highlights the tone of horror and
detachment. The first stanza introduces the scene portraying the hellish nature of the
show referring ironically to a battle as opposed to the relaxing nature of
leisure, which leaves the narrator feeling isolated. The colloquial title may
also refer to the fake face of bravery shown by the soldiers as they were
expected as to be a beacon of hope despite the majority walking to their own
funeral. This is shown through his proximity above hell and the ambiguity of
the narrator s position within the scene as he looked down upon a Hadean
landscape of Death . The use of simplistic language expresses the lack of
hyperbole, therefore increasing the shock he aimed to inflict as this suggests
he has bypassed hell and has gone on to experience worse. The capitalisation of
the primary letter in Death places emphasis on the word and reminds the
reader of the impact of war. Owen continues the express the misery through the
use of personification in the third line sad land, weak with sweats of dearth
shows the weariness which does not benefit land nor inhabitants, essentially
self-destructing itself. The spondee
within sad land, weak highlights the narrator s feeling of disjointedness as
he does not feel connected to humanity anymore. The half-rhyme of dearth
refers to famine, whether that be metaphorically of hope or literally of food
as the blockages in the First World War led to starvation and ultimately death.
This is further instated as he portrays the Earth to be inhabitable through the
line gray, cratered
like the moon . The colour imagery magnifies the lack of joy as a film of
despair covers the eyes of the soldiers. It may also refer to the dust on their
faces as they carry on fighting. The holes within upon the surface of the
Earth, mirror that of the soldier s soul as the war has broken their humanity
into pieces. The use of the plosive and hard c in pocks and scabs leaves a
picture of illness and barrenness using both auditory and visual imagery. Perhaps,
Owen is alluding, as some of the more outspoken Romantics did, to the idea of
humanity as a plague, however it is more likely that he is viewing war itself
as a haggard plague , destroying everything that it touches. The tone then develops as Owen expresses death and
horror through the use of dehumanization and zoomorphism in stanzas 2 to 8. The
narrator uses animalistic imagery as he likens the soldiers to thin
caterpillars, slowly uncoiled as they have retreated from humanity. Their
diminished size shows their irrelevance and insignificance as they follow the
will of their superiors. Although they know war is ineffective, the soldiers
are slowly ingrained and lulled into thinking they with be safe within war
through the means of Jingoistic propaganda. The futility of war is further
highlighted as their entrapment is shown through the triad of verbs in line 9
as they writhed and shrivelled, killed. The soldier s attempt at fighting
against the nature of the war are portrayed to be fruitless. The last word is
punctuated with a full stop mirroring the lack of movement and the finality of when
a life is taken. This dehumanization is continued as their journey is
negatively connoted with slimy indicating either their motivations are
unwholesome as their fight for survival compromises their enemy s life. Further
allusions to animals are shown through the use of the verb trailed and
scraped leaving the image of a wounded soldier dragging himself despite being
so broken and beaten. Like in Dulce et Decorum est, Owen mocks the idealistic
statement instead depicting the harsh realities of war. This derisive outlook
is continued as the olfactory image of those foul openings symbolizing the
words of the politicians that led the world astray into war. The openings are
also referring to the pits of hell. This hellish imagery is also prevalent in
the 7th stanza wherein the German soldiers are described to be
abundant spawns as they become war tools, soulless. The active verb ramped
indicated the mindless nature of war as the Devil s children consume and
demolish hope frantically disregarding the pain of becoming a machine. Line 21
and 22 uses triads to emanate the wounds left physically on the soldiers the
plosive bitten backs portraying his sorrow and bitterness. This is further
shown through the use of I as the first person narrative connects him to
humanity once more. The poem concludes in the final stanza, as Owen comes
to terms with the realization of the bleak outcome of war and the everlasting
impression it will have on him personally and the society surrounding him. The
flow of the poem is disturbed as he comes to this realization as line 26 has
iambs, spondees and trochees within the sentence causing the structure to be
stilted as the truth settles within his mind. This enjambment, with the use of
caesura imparts a tone of desperation as it adds to the disruptive image of the
voice seeing his own body on the battlefield. Through the use of zoomorphism,
the jarring image of hope is shattered as the poem ends abruptly as God,
denoted as He is left to watch as he died leaving his fellow soldiers to
fight on. The Show is adorned with the words of Yeats, a poet
whom disliked and disapproved of Owen s writing denoting it to be blood, dirt
and sucked sugar stick , as it highlights the inevitable nature of destruction,
lacking the beauty poems are commonly associated with.
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